On this fathers day,
for you to love this poem I pray.
As i reflect on my twenty years,
it almost brings me to tears.
You are the best dad a girl could ask for,
and without you my life would be poor.
I love you more than otter pops,
and even more than an alcholic adicted to schnapps. (sorry that was a stretch!)
I just wanted to take a second and let you know
to you i owe, all my rewards in which i sow! hahaha love you dad!
8 comments:
Wow, it must have been REALLY late when you wrote that one! Something else MUST rhyme with "otter pops".
Here some ideas for something that ryhmes with otter pops:
Lamb Chops
I love you so much my heart stops
Flip Flops
Tank Tops
Lollipops
Traffic Cops (my personal favorite since you have 3 speeding tickets)
Just to name a few...
Ahhh yes, now we are talking- I think you ought to re-do the last stanza - these seem a bit more fitting for your Dad!!!!! PS I'm kinda pulling for lamb chops!!
sorry its the only thing i could think of! Im going to keep my master piece the way it is. An artist always stands by their work!
Jessica: I love the poem just the way it is. --Dad
I love it too...this poem thing will get my favorite post of the month vote. The whole cute picture, poem, holiday and then insueing debate about ryhming have been highly entertaining.
Close second goes to the mexican marriage and the intial post by kim...if it had included a picture maybe this would be diffrent..ty all!
thank you dad and steven.. i appreciate all your support of my creative juices!
Jessica, I sat with you during the grand abyss and so I think I should also be thanked for supporting your creative juices. Plus I am going to hang one of your pictures (even if it isn't good) in my office. What more support are you looking for? Love you.
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